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Monday, January 25, 2021

Spaced Out? You Probably Need One Space Instead of Two

We have a special guest blogger today. He is ever interested in helping others--as an author or editor and though this topic is covered in my The Frugal Editor, it behooves any author submitting material to start changing the way the type right now--whether they have read or plan to read my book or not. It takes a while to change and old habit!  (-: 


Spaces

This morning, I woke up somewhat spaced out, so I thought I’d write about spaces. No, I don’t mean multiple universes, but the blank nothing-character in between letters.


As an editor, I often need to teach my clients when the spaces (and the longer spaces inserted by the Tab key) should be deported to outer space.


Invariable rules

1. There should be only ONE space between sentences. It doesn’t matter that your grandmother’s typing instructor told her to put in two. That was then, now is now. Now, the rule is, one space between sentences.

2. Spaces and tabs have no business being at the end of a paragraph. They do no particular harm in an email or a letter or a casual post, but can be nasty in anything meant for publication. During the several transformations the file will undergo, they can cause unintended blank lines. So, it’s a good idea to get into the habit of never inserting them.

3. There is a different reason for banning spaces and tabs at the beginning of a paragraph: they are too easy to leave off, spoiling the appearance, and sometimes ease of reading of the document. If you want a first-line indent, format the Style you are using to have one. (What’s a Style? Study the Help file of your word processor.)


Spaces that cause arguments

Currently I am exchanging beta reads with a nice lady who is also an editor. She has firmly told me off for having spaces anywhere near an ellipsis (...) or an em dash (—). I have had publishers instruct me that their house style is to always have spaces in such places.


My attitude is that writing is communication. Anything that makes the message easier to read is good. Anything that increases difficulty is bad. And anything that makes no difference is — of no difference.


So, as long as you are completely consistent within one body of writing, you can have an em dash without spaces, or with one at each end. However, avoid a space at one end and not the other.


With ellipses, a space can actually be a useful pointer. You can distinguish a passage that peters out... like this from a ...resumption.

 

I do hope this exposition has not got you spaced out, but rather has made a space for an improvement in your editing skills.


Isn’t English a wonderful language? How can one little word have so many meanings?

 

Bio

Dr. Bob Rich has been editing for several small, independent publishers, and for a steady stream of writers pre-publication, since 1999. He is on the way to getting used to the activity. In 2007, one of his editing clients entered his name in the (now sadly defunct) Editors and Preditors’ contest for Best Editor, then lined up the votes. Bob was ranked as “Best Editor of the year.” He considers himself to be a literary midwife.

However, he is not particularly anxious to have a barrage of work. His main reason for accepting editing jobs is the joy of being of benefit rather than the money.

He is also the author of 18 books, five of them award-winners. All of them are tools for working for a survivable future, and one worth surviving in, because he is a Professional Grandfather. If you want to know what that means, or even if you don’t, visit his popular blog, Bobbing Around, at https://bobrich18.wordpress.com


MORE ABOUT THE BLOGGER

 Howard-Johnson is the multi award-wining author of fiction, creative nonfiction, and poetry. She is also a marketing consultant, editor, and author of the multi award-winning HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers including the multi award-winning The Frugal Book Promoter (http://bit.ly/FrugalBookPromoIII), now offered by Modern History Press in its third edition. 

Carolyn's latest is in the #HowToDoItFrugally Series of books for writers is How to Get Great Book Reviews Frugally and Ethically. She has two booklets in the #HowToDoItFrugally Series, both in their second editions from Modern History Press. Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers (http://bit.ly/LastMinuteEditsII) and The Great First Impression Book Proposal (http://bit.ly/BookProposalsII) are career boosters in mini doses and both make ideal thank you gifts for authors. 

The Frugal Editor (http://bit.ly/FrugalEditor), now in its second edition, is the winningest book in the series. Carolyn also has three frugal books for retailers including one she encourages authors to read because it helps them convince retailers to host their workshops, presentations, and signings. It is A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques (http://bit.ly/RetailersGuide). In addition to this blog, Carolyn helps writers extend the exposure of their favorite reviews at 
TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com. 

Carolyn also blogs at all things editing--grammar, formatting and more--at The Frugal, Smart, and Tuned-In Editor (http://TheFrugalEditor.blogspot.com). Learn more and follow for news on her new releases direct from Amazon: http://bit.ly/CarolynsAmznProfile.

Thursday, November 10, 2016

Let's Make Our Submissions Look Professional


Rules of the Road
by
Valerie Allen
To write well and be more successful, every writer needs to be aware of the most common standards in the publishing industry:
ñ  Ultimately your manuscript must be in a word processing program
ñ  Use one inch margins on all sides
ñ  Justify text, including the first sentence
ñ  Indent .5 for all paragraphs after the first one
ñ  Use 12 point type, simple fonts (Times New Roman works well)
ñ  Use one space after the period
ñ  Dialogue requires quotation marks (“Where are you?”)
ñ  Start a new paragraph with each different speaker
ñ  Keep the speaker’s action and dialogue in the same paragraph
ñ  Use subject verb sentence structure
     (USE: “This is important,” Valerie said.
     NOT: “This is important,” said Valerie.)
ñ  For time sequence use both words: and then
     (USE: She picked up a pen, and then wrote a note.
     NOT: She picked up a pen, then wrote a note.)
ñ  Punctuation marks go inside quotation marks (“Here I am,” Valerie said. “Where are you?” she asked.)
ñ  An apostrophe replaces a missing letter (goin’, won’t)
ñ  Use italics for internal character thoughts.
ñ  Limit the use of exclamation points (!) and dashes (-)
ñ  Use only one punctuation mark at the end of a sentence
     (USE: “You did what?” NOT: “You did what?!!!”)
ñ  Avoid clichés
ñ  Avoid over-use of that, very, just



MORE ABOUT TODAY'S GUEST BLOGGER

Valerie Allen, author, playwright, and speaker, writes fiction, non-fiction, short stories, plays, and children's books. She is a popular speaker at writer's conferences, libraries, and community events using her book: Write, Publish, Sell! Quick, Easy, Inexpensive Ideas for the Marketing Challenged 2nd Edition. It is available at http://bit.ly/ValerieAllen 

She is a co-founder of Authors for Authors, which supports new and experienced authors with book fairs, book launches, book displays, and writing seminars. Authors from across the US  have had their books displayed at two annual Florida book fairs held in March and November sponsored by AuthorsforAuthors.com

Valerie Allen invites questions and comments. She can be reached via FB, Twitter, Google+ and

at VAllenWriter@gmail.com or ValerieAllenWriter.com  or  Amazon.com/author/valerieallen


MORE ABOUT THE BLOGGER

Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of This Is the Place; Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered; Tracings, a chapbook of poetry; and how to books for writers including the award-winning second edition of, The Frugal Book Promoter: How to get nearly free publicity on your own or by partnering with your publisher; The multi award-winning second edition of The Frugal Editor; and Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers . The Great First Impression Book Proposal is her newest booklet for writers. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. Some of her other blogs are TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com, a blog where authors can recycle their favorite reviews. She also blogs at all things editing, grammar, formatting and more at The Frugal, Smart and Tuned-In Editor .

Sunday, April 24, 2016

Loving and Hating Rejection Letters


I'm sharing with you an example of the kind of rejection every author wants to get--with a reservation (of course!) 

Still, I’m hugely grateful for it and happy to put myself on the line so you may benefit from it, too.  It is a rarity among the finer and more established literary journals in the world. 

Most journals send canned rejections. But if you watch for clues, you can tell which submissions will reap the most benefit.  As an example, sometimes they offer a subscription to their journal with your entry fee.  Some say you will get input from the judges. And some, like Missouri Review, send you rejections that make you feel good instead of lousy!  Keep reading for info on one of their contests! 

But back to the rejection and my not-so-grateful reaction to it:


From: Missouri Review <submissions@missourireview.org>
Date: February 9, 2016 at 9:37:43 AM PST
To:
hojonews@aol.com
Subject: Your submission to Missouri Review
Dear Carolyn Howard-Johnson,

Thank you for sending us "The True Big Bass Story".

This is a delightful story with a great grasp of narrative movement, plot, and strong insights on the world of journalism.

Unfortunately this particular piece was not a right fit for Missouri Review, but we were very impressed by your writing. We hope that you will feel encouraged by this short note and send us something else.

We look forward to reading more.

Sincerely,

The Editors of Missouri Review

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We’re awarding a $1,000 first prize in Prose, Poetry, Audio Documentary and Humor categories in our 9th Annual Miller Audio Prize audio competition. Send us your entries by March 15, 2016.


The only additional thing I could have asked for (would it be presumptuous of me to ask?) is, why would a story with bigotry as a theme be “not right” for a literary journal in a state that still harbors much bigotry—and don’t all journals (states) fall into that category? 

I guess I am like everyone else. I'd rather get an acceptance in my e-mail box. 


Happy submitting!


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 Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of This Is the Place; Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered; Tracings, a chapbook of poetry; and how to books for writers including the award-winning second edition of, The Frugal Book Promoter: How to get nearly free publicity on your own or by partnering with your publisher; The multi award-winning second edition of The Frugal Editor; and Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers . The Great First Impression Book Proposal is her newest booklet for writers. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. Some of her other blogs are TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com, a blog where authors can recycle their favorite reviews. She also blogs at all things editing, grammar, formatting and more at The Frugal, Smart and Tuned-In Editor .

Sunday, July 21, 2013

Deadline for Greater Los Angeles Writers Society Magazine Coming!


The official GLAWS magazine Literary Landscapes is seeking submissions in short fiction, poetry, book excerpts, and articles for its next issue, due out by October. Thus, please submit your manuscripts no later than August 20th, 2013 for consideration in this upcoming volume.

Quick Guidelines:

- You must be a member in good standing to submit.
- Ideal word count should fall between 500 and 4,000 words.
- We accept all genres, but nothing too offensive, overtly political, religious, or tendentious, "hardcore" or "niche."  Please bear in mind it should appeal to a broad audience.
- We also seek articles on some aspect of writing, publishing, editing, retail, or anything industry-related.
- Please submit material in standard manuscript format.
- We accept previously published content, as long as you own the rights to it.

Send all material to editor@glaws.org

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Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of This Is the Place; Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered; Tracings, a chapbook of poetry; and how to books for writers including the award-winning second edition of, The Frugal Book Promoter: How to get nearly free publicity on your own or by partnering with your publisher; The Frugal Editor: Put Your Best Book Forward to Avoid Humiliation and Ensure Success; and Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers . The Great First Impression Book Proposal is her newest booklet for writers. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. Some of her other blogs are TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com, a blog where authors can recycle their favorite reviews. She also blogs at all things editing, grammar, formatting and more at The Frugal, Smart and Tuned-In Editor .

Thursday, August 02, 2012

Getting Submission Protocol Right

This is from the regular Q&A a la Ann Landers column in my SharingwithWriters newsletter. I used to edit her column (make it fit into available space) when I was a staff writer for The Salt Lake Tribune back in the days of the dinosaurs and love this format for learning about life--and that includes just about everything. (-:


Getting Submission Protocol Right

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Question:

Dearest Carolyn, I am designing a new business card to send to editors that will be attached to the top of my manuscripts when I submit them. I would like to know if the correct title under my name should be "Writer?" or "Novelist?" Thank you for your help. I appreciate it so much! Your newsletter was full of wonderful information. I enjoyed it and look forward to the next one with great anticipation!. Hope you are having a good week.

Sincerely, Kae Kleinman (student from Eve Caram's UCLA class).



Answer:



Kae, sounds as if you need The Frugal Book Promoter. Though a business card is OK, you need a cover letter or query letter with your manuscript and you didn't mention that. The Frugal Book Promoter or the chapter on query letters in The Frugal Editor (www.budurl.com/TheFrugalEditor) will keep you from doing something that will mark you as an amateur. I take it your book is a novel. You should follow each publisher's or agent's submission instructions exactly. That probably means you won't send the whole manuscript.

If you want to slip a card into the package, fine. But don't attach it to the manuscript. And, I'd use "novelist" if that's what you're shopping and not a whole range of genres which is  what the generic term "writer" connotes.

Having said that, you can probably get by without a business card--at least for this purpose. Maybe you'll want to wait for a bit. Say until you have a great Web site page or a blog that showcases your platform.

Hope this helps.

CHJ

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Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of This Is the Place; Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered; Tracings, a chapbook of poetry; and how to books for writers including the award-winning second ediction of, The Frugal Book Promoter: How to get nearly free publicity on your own or by partnering with your publisher; The Frugal Editor: Put Your Best Book Forward to Avoid Humiliation and Ensure Success; and Great Little Last Minute Editing Tips for Writers . The Great First Impression Book Proposal is her newest booklet for writers. She has three FRUGAL books for retailers including A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. Some of her other blogs are TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com, a blog where authors can recycle their favorite reviews. She also blogs at all things editing, grammar, formatting and more at The Frugal, Smart and Tuned-In Editor . If your followers at Twitter would benefit from this blog post, please use the little Green widget to let them know about this blog:

Monday, October 19, 2009

Be Submission and Promotion Brave: What Do You Have To Lose?

Famous Internet Voices Radio host and author Lillian Cauldwell is guest blogger today. She is playing a bit of psychologist because we were talking about how painful it is for us to see talented authors take their chances and let their books ride on the belief that it will get somehow get lots of readership. What if it doesn't? Our books are our babies! We really don't want to trust to luck! So here she is, inspiring as usual:

Ever hear of that phrase, "You've got nothing to lose".

They're right. You don't have anything to lose because you're not putting your best foot forward. You're not taking any chances with your writing, placing in a contest, submissions to an e-zine or regular magazine or even submitting your query letter, synopsis, and bio of yourself to an agent or a book publisher.

What does this sentence really mean? More importantly, what does this sentence really mean to you and how do you overcome such a seemingly minimal responsibility.

For one thing, you lose more if you don't submit. I know what I'm talking about. My first alternate history book was released this August by Publish America. How are sales you're going to ask? Let me tell you, "Sales are not good." Why, you ask?

Because after receiving only two book reviews for my book and three national chain bookstores refused to carry my book or promote me in a book signing, I quietly withdrew from the fray. You can't do that if you're a serious writer or what book publishers and agents call, professional writers.

I consider myself a professional writer. After moaning and groaning and kicking myself in my posterior, a mid-list writer, Jacqueline Lichtenberg, told me to get off my butt and promote myself.

"What do you have to lose?"

My big loses were: branding my name, getting my book noticed, getting me noticed, and letting the world know about my achievements. How, you may ask, did you do that? This is what I finally did.

I created a newsletter; This-n-That that provides additional information and tips to writers who want to enhance their writing careers. Simegen.com hosts my mailing list for this list.

Secondly, I joined www.authorsden.com and put up my Web page with general information, filling in their forms, transferred the rest of me and my books to their online site where people visit your web and learn some interesting things about you. A Web site! Aha! Did something explode into your brain with sparklies and colored lights?

Thirdly, I involved myself in several writers' groups online, joined one or two writer's organizations, submitted articles to my Author's Den Web site, put them in my newssletter or sent them out to writers' e-zines and other magazines. People are hungry and thirsty for FREE information on the many ins and outs of writing.

I wrote science fiction, fantasy, and speculative short stories and submitted them to other Web sites, to online e-zines, at my Author's Den Web Site and submitted to www.simegen.com charitable donation site, Simecenter, where readers can download them for a contribution to a charity. I also submitted one short story, "Lottery," to www.sffworld.com and it was accepted for their December issue online. I had my first e-zine credit. I submitted to another fantasy short story to Playboy Magazine, "Mask, A Modern Fairy Tale" and six poems to The Atlantic Review.

What did I have to lose?

I am resubmitting my first nonfiction, book, "Teenagers! A Bewildered Parent's Guide" to publishers and agents who do reprints of books that are no longer contracted with their previous publisher and they reprint them.

Poetry was another niche that I found I was quite good at. I submitted them to several prestigious magazines.

What do I have to lose?

The answer is still, NOTHING, of course.

When you reach a time in your life when something hits you squarely in the face, the first thought that comes to you should be: What do I have to lose? And, the answer facing you squarely should be, "nothing." Send that short story out. You might be surprised and the magazine will accept it, return it with good rejection advice, or the editor might scribble a note telling you to resubmit it when it's corrected. The possibilities are endless.

What do you have to lose? You know that answer by now. I shouldn't have to shout it.

Send out review letters asking Publisher's Weekly, Midwest Book Review, The New York Times Review, or The Los Angeles Book Review to review your book. Again, you might be surprised, and one of them might review your book and give you a five star rating. It could happen, you know.

Or get yourself interviewed on radio, TV, Internet; what do you have to lose? You might actually be invited for that interview. You might talk to a national host where 80,0000 people are listening to you. Luck... or is it? What do you have to lose?

Life is funny. It can take you completely unaware sometimes, but if you don't try, if you don't put out your best foot forward, if you don't take the chance, how will you ever know if you're a clunker or a flyer?

When you come across this sentence, "What do you have to lose?" Remember, one thing. It's not the reward that counts (although it does make one glow), but it's the work and effort you put into it that makes you shout out loud, "I've got to try or no one will know about me or my titles, except me, myself, and I.

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Lillian is "Creator" Cauldwell:
Voices of the People - United We Roar!
734-332-5902
Her radio show may be found at: http://internetvoicesradio.com
She blogs at: http://pivtr.blogspot.com
Her Web site is: http://lilliancauldwell.com -----
This blog comes to you from Carolyn Howard-Johnson, author of This Is the Place; Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered; Tracings, a chapbook of poetry; and two how to books for writers, The Frugal Book Promoter: How To Do What Your Publisher Won't and The Frugal Editor: Put Your Best Book Forward to Avoid Humiliation and Ensure Success. Her FRUGAL book for retailers is A Retailer’s Guide to Frugal In-Store Promotions: How To Increase Profits and Spit in the Eyes of Economic Downturns with Thrifty Events and Sales Techniques. She is also the author of the Amazon Short, "The Great First Impression Book Proposal". Some of her other blogs are TheNewBookReview.blogspot.com, a blog where authors can recycle their favorite reviews. She also blogs at all things editing, grammar, formatting and more at The Frugal, Smart and Tuned-In Editor blog.