Your Story Should Be Up, Down, and All Around

 

 Contributed by Children's Author Karen Cioffi

I’ve noticed that people who want to write a story but are new to the arena don’t understand what’s involved in writing a good story.

And I’ve seen lots of drafts that are cute, but they have no story arc or character arc. They’re simply a series of related events or incidents.

Along with these story ideas that don’t have a story arc, a lot of new authors don’t want to make their  protagonist real.

A story and its characters should be like a roller coaster, not a carousel.

First, let’s touch on what makes a publishing worthy story.

The very first thing is that your protagonist needs a big problem. It needs to be something that he struggles to overcome.

Here are a couple of examples of a problem that needs to be overcome:
•    Maybe Rafael is being bullied at school.
•    Maybe Sophia just got a new bike and was told not to leave it alone. She left it unattended at the park and it was stolen.
•    Maybe Lisa moved to a new neighborhood and had to start a new school. She’s anxious about all the changes.

After the problem has been established, the main character (MC) must try to figure out how to overcome it.

But as life isn’t smooth, the MC can’t overcome the problem in one attempt.

The protagonist needs to struggle to reach the goal. He needs to try a couple of things, fail, and become deflated before he finally comes up with a plan that leads to success.

Along with the MC succeeding, there must be some growth.
•    Maybe he learns he’s not the person he thought he was, like the protagonist, Wang, in my chapter book “Walking Through Walls.”
•    Maybe she learns compassion.
•    Maybe she learns how to make friends.

The story arc and character arc both have a beginning, middle, and end.

When thinking of a story arc, think of a triangle.

1.    The exposition: The introduction is at the bottom of the left side. It introduces the MC and setting.
2.    The trigger: The problem appears (the inciting incident). It may be internal or external, but it needs to be addressed.
3.    The quest: The MC struggles to overcome the problem. The action is rising, and so is the conflict. On her quest to find a solution, the MC encounters obstacles that must be overcome.
4.    The climax: The MC makes a critical choice and engages in his final attempt. He’s chosen his path and it’s the beginning of his change. The action declines as everything unfolds.
5.    The resolution: The MC has reached the end of the road. It's now the reward or consequence time. But whichever it is, the MC needs to have grown in some way as a result of the journey. When writing for young children, the journey needs to end with success.

For #4, the climax, think of a kid about to steal for the first time. Will his conscience kick in and stop him, or will he go through with it?

So, you can see that a series of related incidents does not lend itself to a a full story arc.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Karen Cioffi is an award-winning children’s author, ghostwriter, rewriter, and coach with clients worldwide. If you need help with your children’s story, please visit Karen Cioffi Writing for Children.
 

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